Khushi’s POV
“So what happened to lavanya?” I asked. It was twilight and
Akash, Arnav and Payal di were sitting around me chattering.
“Well she has been sent to juvenile jail, though it wasn’t a
pretty sight...I mean with her parents. They were in full denial mode that
their daughter could do anything that horrible and her mom even fainted! I feel
so bad for her parents.” Akash murmured, his voice mingled with disgust and
pity.
“Its all my fault! Had it not been for me, lavanya would never
have...” Arnav began, his voice breaking twice but I interrupted him fiercely.
“Of course its not your fault Arnav! Don’t you dare blame
yourself for whatever she did, not unless you can truly help your natural
charisma and face of Adonis!” I yelled, unthinkingly and their reactions were
instantaneous.
“What?” I asked self-consciously, unable to make of anything
from Akash and di’s relentless, smug stares and the faint blush that covered
Arnav’s cheeks.
“WOW!” Bhai you are truly on progress!” Akash exclaimed.
“Natural charisma! Face of Adonis!” Di giggled and that’s
when my senses kicked in and I blushed ten shades of red. Holy crap! I didn’t
actually say that out loud!
“I think we should give you both some privacy for a while!”
Akash grinned evilly before dragging a still-giggling Payal di out of the room.
I stared determinedly at the floor, felling so awfully embarrassed!
“Adonis huh?” Arnav teased, his voice light and I blushed
even more if that were even possible.
“I didn’t know that you had such high regards for my appeal!”
He continued and his teasing snapped me into perspective, flaring my anger.
“ And I didn’t know that you had such strong romantic
feelings for me!” I spat and regretted my impromptu reaction immediately as
Arnav flushed and his eyes-widened.
“Wh...what did you say?” He gasped.
“I...uh.. nothing of much relevance.” I blubbered, lowering
my head.
What was with me and babbling today like an idiot? I had
promised myself that I wouldn’t bring the fact that I heard Arnav say ‘I love
you’ to me over and over again as he thought I was unconscious to his notice!
“Khushi don’t lie to me!” He said severely, his voice rising
a few octave in his embarrassment and nervousness.
“Did you hear...I mean were you able to make out what was
going on...” Arnav trailed of suggestively and I sighed.
He knew that I had heard him confess and even if I tried to
refute him, that wouldn’t be of much avail as he’d catch me immediately. It was
better to spill.
“Yes, I could hear everything though I couldn’t move my body
at all. I was totally numb!” I murmured, still not meeting his gaze.
Arnav groaned and immediately got up walking out of the
room.I felt a strong sense of loss as he started to get out of the room and I
immediately reached out for him! Embarrassment be damned, I wanted him beside
me now!
“Arnav you don’t really walk out on a girl whom you
confessed your love without hearing her response!”I growled at him playfully and
he immediately spun around and rushed to my side, his handsome face expectant!
“Arnav... I love you too!” I breathed closing my eyes and
remembering all those moments that we had spent together. They maybe
inconsequential for others, but those simple moments were the foundation of our
relationship.
I didn’t open my eyes, but I felt the mattress sag as Arnav
settled beside me and pulled me in a loving embrace, kissing my forehead. It
felt so peaceful, so right! The world disappeared for me except for him and his
loving touch.
“I love you too my beautiful khushi!” He whispered in my
ears and my heart exploded with love for this beautiful boy.
We had found out eternal love!
8 years later
Arnav’s POV
“Arnav where are you taking me?” Khushi whined, pouting slightly
and I smiled. Patience wasn’t at all khushi’s thing!
“Patience my love!” I murmured in her ears as I guided my
blindfolded khushi inside the elevator.
I stared at her beautiful face to calm my nerves. This was
going to be the most monumental moment of our lives and I wanted it to be just
perfect.
“Arnav are we in an elevator!” She asked perplexed and I
smiled.
“Yes sweetheart!” I replied shortly. Khushi had been trying
to get me to spill about what I had planned for her to be a surprise and no way
in the hell I was going to let her succeed!
The doors of the elevator opened and I took her in the empty
room, our footsteps echoing. A gentle breeze ruffled our hair as I took her to
the viewer’s point of the Eiffel tower, over-looking the sprawling city of
love-Paris!
“Arnav what...” She began, as I proceeded to untie her
blindfold, but stopped short as she saw the beauty of the scene in front of
her.
“Oh my God! This is so beautiful!” She whispered, her face
awed.
I smoothly took out the small velvet box from my pocket and
knelt on one knee in front of her. Khushi gasped when she noticed my position.
“Khushi, I loved you since the very second I laid my eyes on
you with my heart, mind and soul. You are my heart, my breath, my reason to
live. I can’t spend even a second without you. Not even a lifetime is enough
for me to love you...to show you how dearly I love you! I want to be mine in every way possible! I
want to cherish you forever. Will you marry me?” I asked, looking up at her
beautiful, breath-taking face.
She looked overwhelmed and her eyes shown with love so deep
that I was rendered breathless. Her angel-like face was glowing!
“Yes!” She whispered quietly, still I heard and never had
been any word so pleasing to hear.
“Thank you!” I whispered, sliding the engagement ring in the
third finger of her left hand and kissing it.
I got up and she threw herself in my arm, her lips crushing
mine and her hands snaking up to grip my hair as my hands slipped on to her
waist.
Through all tryst and turmoil that we had faced throughout
our lives, the endless battle of jealousy, anger and agony, our love had
emerges unscathed and victorious.
So, beneath the velvety canopy of twinkling stars, in the
city of love, we found out happily ever after through our Heart Wrenching
Adoration!
THE END
Love is
anterior to life,
Posterior
to
death,
Initial of
creation, and
The exponent of
breath!
Emily Dickinson.
Acknowledgment
So, here I end my story ‘Heart Wrenching Adoration’! My special thanks
and all the credit for this story goes to Nuts4arshi di, Smruti, Sc12345 di,
Rasagna , Shravaya, Sa_arshi di and khushifan di, who encouraged me through
their kind words throughout. Thank you so much guys for being so supportive and
patient with me and letting go of all the mistakes in my writing. I’m indebted
to your guys forever and I truly wish I could give you all big hugs!
I’d also like to thank Priyanka, Anonymous and all others who ever
commented on my story. Please forgive me if I’m missing out any names.
I also want to request you guys to drop your e-mail id in the
comments section and the unregistered users may do so by using Anonymous. The
reson for my request is that I won’t be writing any story from now on for at
least this year as it is my 12th. This year is so crucial for me
from studies point of view and I couldn’t keep on writing now.
I’ve my coaching classes all seven days of the week and that too for
four hours(C.P.T and 12th combined ). So, you can understand that
after 5 hours of school and 4 hours of coaching I can’t possibly update!
I’m so sorry for this guys and I’m going to miss you all a lot and
trust me taking this decision wasn’t easy on me at all, but I don’t have any
option. But I promise to resume my writing at the earliest and I will inform
you guys through mail when I do so. When I come back, I may in fact have a
surprise for you guys if things go on as they are!
So, please, please, please drop your e-mail ids guys!
Love,
Akansha
We had found out eternal love!
Thanks for the lovely story !
ReplyDeletei understand akansha !!!! i loved ur story !!!!!!!!!! all the best for ur studies !! tc :D
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:'(:'( I'm sad this story ended, iwas sooo attached to this story im gonna miss this soo much and thank u thank u very much for writing this beautiful story dear. Gonna miss u very much dear, but I do understand coz i've too just finished my 12th class but do inform me when u write another story here's my email id smrutip137@gmail.com. and all the very best for ur 12th class journey. Love u ♥
ReplyDeleteOh it ended..?? That was too soon Akansha :( I was hoping to read more lovely Arshi moments. & u not gonna update for a whole year :( :( :( Gonna miss u dearly yaar. But well, studies are imp too and 12th std is the foundation of our future endeavours so best of luck :) But don't 4gt to mail as soon as u r bak with another sexy story. My email id is neetuy.267@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteBye :( Lots and lots of love and best wishes..& don't 4gt me even wen u b'cum a big hot-shot writer some day in future, which u most definitely will ;)
& thanx for acknowledging me :) That was really sweet and I'll always be there to support you and luv ur stories. And THANKS TO YOU for giving such beautiful stories to us. :) :)
ReplyDeleteit was an awesome story and I did not miss a single word.thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story & please inform me when u start writing again. bhavithakakumanu@ gmail.com is my email id.
ReplyDeleteit was really a beautiful story and i really loved it..i have not expectd the end so soon.. But i understand your sitution..i will wait for your new story....my id is kiran.rawat60@yahoo.in
ReplyDeleteThanks a Lot for a Teen story on our arshi..i loved the concept and your descriptions..
ReplyDeleteBTW all the best for your exams..I am also a CA..do keep in touch in case you need any help..email id dayavanti@live.com
The ending is amazing, at first i m sad as you ended this but your exams are more important. All the best for this year. my email: sairasagna@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteAwesome story - just read the whole thing in one shot!! Will check out the other links you have as well. My email ID is rmehrotra20@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written story... just read the whole chunk at one go...! Wonderful... Just loved every bit of it...!
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